comment by Mr Parker

correction by Mr Parker

Must be suitable for the reader

show dont tell

stick with one tense

Use the correct tense, eg, use a present tense for A day in a life, or a diary, use past tense for stories or retelling things

grammar

Different kinds of vocab!

Techniques like alliteration

varieties

show off your vocabulary

Appropriate

Grammar

Tense.

Have evidence

Shows facts and opinions, evaluating both sides of what u're writing about, or write about many aspects that are relative

In order. Should not jump around.

An introduction and a conclusion! :D

Stick to the task/ question and not babble

Point evidence explanation

In paragraphs

P.E.E

Different sentence structures

Burger essay; a plain burger doesn't taste as good as one with lettuce, cheese and tomato!! ( the lettuce cheese and tomato is the evidence and explanation, the burger is the point and the bun is the reasoning and evaluation)