Qualities of a good essay starting thoughts ideas Mind Map

Qualities of a good essay starting thoughts/ideas
Key
comment by Mr Parker
correction by Mr Parker
punctuation is as important as text!
Interesting
Must be suitable for the reader
full stop
show dont tell
creative writing!
Tense
stick with one tense
Use the correct tense, eg, use a present tense for A day in a life, or a diary, use past tense for stories or retelling things
Essays almost always use present tense
English Spelling
grammar
correct use of punctuation
First, second, third person. Stick to the chosen one.
essays normally use 3rd person
Language
Different kinds of vocab!
Techniques like alliteration
Similies
metaphors
Repitition
Foreshadowing
Onomatepoeia
Personification
Analyse not use
varieties
show off your vocabulary
The more complex, and complicated, the better!
Appropriate
Grammar
Tense.
Stick to one particular tense
Analysis
Have evidence
use quotes
in each paragraph P.E.E
Shows facts and opinions, evaluating both sides of what u're writing about, or write about many aspects that are relative
Very Good!
Structure
In order. Should not jump around.
An introduction and a conclusion! :D
Good!
Stick to the task/ question and not babble
Point evidence explanation
Great!
In paragraphs
P.E.E
Point, evidence, example
Great!
Different sentence structures
Complex senten ces
Burger essay; a plain burger doesn't taste as good as one with lettuce, cheese and tomato!! ( the lettuce cheese and tomato is the evidence and explanation, the burger is the point and the bun is the reasoning and evaluation)
Great!
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