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雅思寫作（觀點類）
這是一篇關於雅思寫作（觀點類）的心智圖，主要內容包括：結尾段，主體段2，主體段1，問題舉例，開頭段。有需要的同學，可以收藏喲。
Edited at 2024-11-19 07:23:18
- 魯米：10個靈性的高維覺醒
魯米：靈性覺醒的10個維度。當你停止尋找自己，便會找到整個宇宙，因為你正在尋找的東西，也在尋找你。任何你每天持之以恆在做的事情，都可以為你打開一扇通向精神深處的門。靜默中，我滑入祕境，萬般皆妙樂觀察身邊的神奇，不要聲張。你生而有翼，為何喜歡爬行？靈魂擁有了它自己的耳朵，能夠聽到頭腦無法理解的事情。向內尋求一切的答案吧，宇宙中的一切都在你體內。情人們並不最終相遇某處，這個世界沒有離別。傷口是光進入你內心的地方。
- 病理生理學-心力衰竭
慢性心力衰竭，不僅僅是心率的快慢問題！它源於心肌收縮與舒張功能的下降，導致心輸出量不足，進而引發肺循環充血和體循環淤血。從病因、誘因到代償機制，心衰的病理生理過程複雜多樣。通過控制水腫、減輕心臟前後負荷、改善心臟舒縮功能，以及防治基本病因，我們可以有效應對這一挑戰。了解心衰的機制與臨床表現，掌握防治策略，才能更好地守護心臟健康。
- 病理生理學-缺血-再灌注損傷
缺血再灌注損傷是器官或組織恢復血液供應後，細胞功能代謝障礙和結構破壞反而加重的現象。其主要機制包括自由基生成增多、鈣超載以及微血管和白細胞的作用。心臟和腦是常見的受損器官，表現為心肌代謝和超微結構變化、心功能下降等。防治措施包括清除自由基、減輕鈣超載、改善代謝和控制再灌注條件，如低鈉、低溫、低壓等。理解這些機制有助於製定有效治療方案，減輕缺血性損傷。
雅思寫作（觀點類）
- 魯米：10個靈性的高維覺醒
魯米：靈性覺醒的10個維度。當你停止尋找自己，便會找到整個宇宙，因為你正在尋找的東西，也在尋找你。任何你每天持之以恆在做的事情，都可以為你打開一扇通向精神深處的門。靜默中，我滑入祕境，萬般皆妙樂觀察身邊的神奇，不要聲張。你生而有翼，為何喜歡爬行？靈魂擁有了它自己的耳朵，能夠聽到頭腦無法理解的事情。向內尋求一切的答案吧，宇宙中的一切都在你體內。情人們並不最終相遇某處，這個世界沒有離別。傷口是光進入你內心的地方。
- 病理生理學-心力衰竭
慢性心力衰竭，不僅僅是心率的快慢問題！它源於心肌收縮與舒張功能的下降，導致心輸出量不足，進而引發肺循環充血和體循環淤血。從病因、誘因到代償機制，心衰的病理生理過程複雜多樣。通過控制水腫、減輕心臟前後負荷、改善心臟舒縮功能，以及防治基本病因，我們可以有效應對這一挑戰。了解心衰的機制與臨床表現，掌握防治策略，才能更好地守護心臟健康。
- 病理生理學-缺血-再灌注損傷
缺血再灌注損傷是器官或組織恢復血液供應後，細胞功能代謝障礙和結構破壞反而加重的現象。其主要機制包括自由基生成增多、鈣超載以及微血管和白細胞的作用。心臟和腦是常見的受損器官，表現為心肌代謝和超微結構變化、心功能下降等。防治措施包括清除自由基、減輕鈣超載、改善代謝和控制再灌注條件，如低鈉、低溫、低壓等。理解這些機制有助於製定有效治療方案，減輕缺血性損傷。
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雅思寫作 （觀點類）
問題舉例
① [SiomonP72] As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
④ [SiomonP95] Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work, To what extent do you agree ordisagree?
開頭段
句① 引出他人觀點
Some people believe that... Many people argue that... It is sometimes argued that... It is often said that...
句② 表明觀點
完全同意
l completely agree that... Personally, l support the view that... In my opinion,...
部分同意
I can therefore only partly agree with the assertion that...
完全不同意
However, l completely disagree with the idea that...
主體段1
句① 承認另一觀點的可取之處
On the one hand, l accept that... On the one hand, it is true that On the one hand,... and l see this as a positive trend.
句② 舉例說明
Some of the most successful companies in the world, including technology giants like Google and Facebook, are famous for the relaxed office environments that they try to create.
句③ 解釋
Employees are encouraged to dress casually, and even the company executives and leaders are rarely seen wearing anything other than T-shirts and jeans.
句④ 除此之外
On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful.
句⑤ 總結
In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.
主體段2
句① 主要觀點
On the other hand, ...
句② 角度一
One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them.
句③ 舉例
For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. Perhaps the best example of this would be...
句④ 角度二
I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportioof their profits to support local charities, environment projects or education initiatives.
句⑤ 總結
Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payment by using accounting loopholes, l believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.
結尾段
句① 總結
完全同意
在 conclusion, l believe that...
部分同意
In conclusion, l support the..., but l do not see it as applicable to all...
完全不同意
In conclusion, l would argue that...
題目中包含兩個不同的觀點
雅思寫作 （觀點類）
問題舉例
③ [SiomonP88] Extreme sports such as sky diving and sking are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
⑤ [SiomonP109] Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
開頭段
句① 描述現象確實存在
lt is true that... lt is undeniable that...
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them.
句② 表明觀點
均不同意 （這樣好寫）
I completely disagree with the idea that..., and l therefore believe that...should not be... l completely disagree with this point of view.
主體段1
句① 反駁這現象
In my opinion, so-called...are not as ... as many people think. In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that....
句② 舉例說明
Some of the most successful companies in the world, including technology giants like Google and Facebook, are famous for the relaxed office environments that they try to create.
句③ 解釋
Employees are encouraged to dress casually, and even the company executives and leaders are rarely seen wearing anything other than T-shirts and jeans.
句④ 除此之外
On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful.
句⑤ 總結
In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.
主體段2
句① 也反駁這一觀點
l also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources.
句② 角度一
One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them.
句③ 舉例
For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life.
句④ 角度二
I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportioof their profits to support local charities, environment projects or education initiatives.
句⑤ 總結
Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payment by using accounting loopholes, l believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.
結尾段
句① 總結
在 conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and l believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.
題目講了一個描述然後跟了一個觀點
雅思寫作 （討論類）
問題舉例
① [SiomonP59] Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think thatit will improve people's lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be aeat to life earth .
③ [SiomonP99] In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some peoplebelieve that this is good for the country, but others think that governments shat not allow salaview abovea. ownopinion.
開頭段
句① 描述人們的爭論
People have different views about whether...
句② 承認一方有道理 但是另一方更好
While in some ways it may seem reasonable..., l personally believe that...
主體段1
句① 承認一方有道理
There are various reasons why it might be considered beneficial to allow people...
句②~⑤
Firstly,...Secondly...Finally They belive that the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused, and that scientists should use alternative methods of research
主體段2
句① 自己更喜歡的觀點
However, l agree with those who argue that there should be..
句②~⑤
From the...perspective. Foe example...From the...perspective.
結尾段
句① 總結
In conclusion, l am convinced that..., in spite of its potential risks
雅思寫作 （問題對測類）
問題舉例
① [SiomonP63] In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing ing 項目
開頭段
句① 背景引入
It is true that... had an influence on..between people.
句② 承認問題存在 提出有解決方案
Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate（減輕） these potential problems.
主體段1
句① 會出現很多問題
As people...several related problems can be anticipated
句②~⑤
The main issue is that there will obviously be more... On top of these... Furthermore,....
主體段2
句① 有解決辦法
There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above.
句②~⑤
- Firstly, a simple solution would be to... - A second measure would be for governments to encourage... - Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens
結尾段
句① 總結
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as...
雅思寫作 （追問類）
問題舉例
① [SiomonP67] Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this this positive types of relationships that people make? Has this this 是 Hasive cegorment
開頭段
句① 背景引入
It is true that... had an influence on..between people.
句② 有好有壞
Technology has affected relationships in various ways, and in my opinion there are both positive and negative effects
主體段1
句① 在不同方面存在影響
Technology has had an impact on relationships in business, education and social life.
句②~⑤
Firstly,...Secondly...Finally
主體段2
句①~⑤ 一方面,另一方面
On the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive. On the other hand,...
結尾段
句① 總結
在 conclusion, technology has certainly revolutionised communication between people, but not all of the outcomes of this revolution have been positive.
雅思寫作 （小作文）
替換詞
表示上升
increase, go up, rise up, grow, jump, surge, keep an upward tendency, rocket, soar
表示下降
decrease, go down, decline, fall down, sink, dip, keep a downward tendency, plummet, plunge, drop
表示波動
fluctuate
持平平穩
remain the same, stabilize, remain stable, remain constant
修飾變化幅度
slightly 輕微地，slowly 緩慢地，gradually 逐漸地，steadily 穩定地，rapidly 迅速地，moderately 溫和地,significantly 明顯地，sharply 猛然地，dramatically 急劇地， drastically 急劇地
最高點
reach the peak, arrive at the highest point, reach the top (reach可替換為increase或rise)
最低點
reach the bottom, drop to the lowest point (動詞也可替換為fall, decline等表示下降的字)
佔比最多
佔比最多：occupy the largest proportion of (occupy可替換為make up, take up, account for, proportion可替換為number percentage)
佔比最少
occupy the smallest proportion of
表示倍數
double 兩倍；increase three times 增長了三倍；twice as many as 兩倍；three times big than 比...大三倍
表示約
about, around, approximately, roughly, just over, just under
表示未來
is expected/forecast/predicted/projected to
比例
25%：exactly a quarter；26%：roughly one quarter/ slightly more than a quarter；32%：nearly one-third, nearly a third；49%：around a half/just under a half；50%：fexly ahalf； ；51%：just over a half；
超過
exceed / surpass / overtake
開頭段
替換詞
描述
depicts/represents/provides/describes/shows/illustrates; gives information about; compares;
不同類別
different types of;different categories; different modes; different forms；living in poor；who were classed as poor; living below the poverty line;
年份
between 2000 and 2022；from 2000 to 2020; (in 3 different year) over a period of 20 years; in the years 1980 and 1990
數量
the proportion of；the pecentage of；the number of；the figures of; the amount of
表
the chart；the table；the figure
人
people；population
雅思寫作 （小作文）
概括段
思路
寫圖上最明顯的兩個特徵，不出現具體數字描述，而是高屋建瓴的寫，最好寫能描述整張表的，實在不行就寫最低最高
例句
table chart
描述變化 趨勢
It is clear that the total number of miles travelled by English people using all modes of transport increased significantly between 1985 and 2000.
描述最值
Overall, the UK saw by far the highest levels of spending on the two products.
In each of these years, the US produced more waste than lreland, Japan, Republic of Korea, Poland and Portugal combined,
pie chart
描述最值
...made up the largest proportion of... the majority of...
描述變化 趨勢
It is clear that the total number of miles travelled by English people using all modes of transport increased significantly between 1985 and 2000.
line chart
描述波動
It is clear that average global prices of both food and oil rose considerably between2000 and 2011, although many price fluctuations can be seen during those 11 years.
相關性
Furthermore, the trends for both commodities are very similar, and so a strong correlationis suggested
最值
It is noticeable that overall spending by international visitors to New Zealand was at itshighest between the years 2000 and 2003.
上升下降
It is clear that spending on landline phones fell steadily over the 10-year period,while mobile phone expenditure rose quickly.
交點
The year 2006 marks the point at which expenditure on mobile services overtook that for residential phone services.
bar chart
描述最值
It is clear that the majority of Americans ate in fast food restaurants between once a weekand once a month in all three years shown on the chart.
描述變化 趨勢
We can also see that there was ashift towards eating in these restaurants less frequently by the end of the 10-year period
mixed chart
描述最值
It is clear that parents spent more money each year on their children's participation insports over the 6-year period.
In terms of the number of children taking part, football wassignificantly more popular than athletics and swimming.
flow chart
描述流程
It is clear that there are five stages in the production of cement, beginning with the inputof raw materials and ending with bags of the finished product. To produce concrete, foudifferent materials are mixed together
有幾個步驟，從哪裡開始到哪裡結束
描述變化 趨勢
雅思寫作 （小作文）
描述段
思路
每段差不多3句。永遠不要孤立的描述數字，而是要與其他數字進行比較。注意時態。
例句
table chart
依照同樣趨勢 的一起分類
[段A] Between 1980 and 2000, waste production in the US rose from 131 to 192 million tonnesand rising trends were also seen in Japan, Poland and Portugal. Japan's waste outputincreased from 28 to 53 milional.從 4 to 6.6 and from 2 to 5 million tonnes respectively.
[段B] The trends for lreland and Republic of Korea were noticeably different from thosdescribed above, lo reland, waste production increased more than eightfold, from only o emilion tonnes in 1980 to 5 milion old, from only o emilion tonnes in 1980 to 5 006, 100 月. cut iwaste output by 12 milion tonnes between 1990 and 2000.
依數量分類
In 1999, $witzerland had the highest sales of Fairtrade coffee, at e 3 million, while revenue from Fairtrade bananas was highest in the UK, at e 15 million.
flow chart
流程材料分類
[段A] At the first stage in the production of cement,limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder.This powder is then mixed before it passes intoa rotating heater. After heating, the resultingmixture is ground and c. ,the cement is put in large bags.
Cement is one of the four raw materials that areused in the production of concrete, along withgravel, sand and water. To be exact, concreteconsists of 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15% cement and10% waterp. ina rotating machine called a concrete mixer.