MindMap Gallery IELTS Futian Small Class Essay Writing Guide
Essential skills for writing good English essays! Based on the essence of Wang Daochang's book, the content is divided into seven modules: the first paragraph, the main paragraph, the end, modifications, material, special sentences, and notices. It contains all-purpose sentence patterns that must be tested! You will have a clue when writing English essays in the future!
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This is a mind map about bacteria, and its main contents include: overview, morphology, types, structure, reproduction, distribution, application, and expansion. The summary is comprehensive and meticulous, suitable as review materials.
This is a mind map about plant asexual reproduction, and its main contents include: concept, spore reproduction, vegetative reproduction, tissue culture, and buds. The summary is comprehensive and meticulous, suitable as review materials.
This is a mind map about the reproductive development of animals, and its main contents include: insects, frogs, birds, sexual reproduction, and asexual reproduction. The summary is comprehensive and meticulous, suitable as review materials.
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beginning
Rewrite the question
How to rewrite
1. Go below (concrete, conceptual interchange)
2.show can be changed to give information about, illustrate, describe
3. Rewrite the question stem
1) Rewrite subtitles
Synonym substitution eg: there was an increase in car sales =there were more cars sold out.
Change of part of speech. eg: 60%beef consumption=60% of beef was consumed/eaten/bought. The distance that cars traveled is 3199 miles=people chose car as transportation with 3199 miles.
2) Time rewriting
between 1995 and 2002=in the period of ,from to
in 1999=in the year of ,in the beginning of the period
3) Specific summary exchange
in the UK
in the country/nation (concept)
in the United Kingdom (specific)
4) Synonym conversion
change
variation, alteration, shift, reform, alter
number
figure, data
money
expenditure, spending
proportion
percentage
man
male
data
figures, statistics
family
household
different
various, diverse
annual
per year
kind
type, category
5) Noun clause (don’t use it if you are not familiar with it)
the bar chart illustrates how object data changes/varied
Important tips
The rewriting must be accurate, do not make forced changes
Overview
Feature overview
Ranking comparison: highest ranking during the entire period or highest ranking in the last year
Sentence expression
1.the figure for describing the object was the highest/lowest
2. Describe the subject’s experience in simple sentences, and then add superlatives (use passive as much as possible)
eg: car was chosen to be the most popular transportation by people.
Trend changes: the starting point and the end point increase or decrease compared to each other
Increase or decrease sentence patterns (switch subjects, change sentence patterns)
1. the period witnessed a sharp/slight increase /decrease in description subject
2. the period witnessed an upward trend in describing the subject
Fixed sentence pattern
Total: overall, it can be clearly seen that Sentence 1 (ranking) and /when Sentence 2 (trend)
be careful
1. Be sure to note that compound sentences must have conjunctions and complete sentence components.
2. Pay attention to the tense. Is it past tense?
3. The writing idea should be clear, it is the ranking trend
4 Speed control within 5 minutes
Detail 1 (3-4 sentences)
Data comparison Import data Core: A simple sentence describing what happened to the object, separated by commas, and supplementary explanation of ranking/superlative/difference/multiple.
Compare first year data to high and low
Highest
eg: the majority of boys played basketball, occupying the largest portion.
Difference
A constitute a specific percentage of. . . , difference adjective than the figure for B
eg: men constituted 60% of master's graduates, 20% higher than the figure for women.
multiple
comparatively, the percentage of.... was comparative, multiple more than that of...
eg: comparatively, the percentage of men with master's degrees was higher (60%), 1.5 times more that of females(40%)
same
as primitive as comparison object
resemblance
A.B and C share similar figures, ranging from lowest figure to highest figure.
Ranking
eg: 60% of boys played basketball, followed by football and swimming.
Data group comparison
eg: in the first year, 40% was paid for teachers' salaries, 12% more than other workers' salaries. By contract, resources and furniture and equipment cost the same amount of money(15%) while 2% was used for insurance .
difference, similarity
eg: 60% played basketball, which occupied/constitute/represent/make up/account for/take up/be the largest portion.
Detail 2 (3-4 sentences)
Comparison of trend changes
In chronological order, select stages that can be compared
The object that has changed the most - one sentence description
Decreasing - steady - rising sharply - transcending: decreasing```and remaining stable```, the figures for objects rose sharply,surpassing```
Special points: peaks, troughs, intersections, plateaus
Peak: the number of .....reached the peak at data in time
Bottom: the number of ....bottomed out at data in time
Maintain: the number of ...maintained the same level at data in time
Increase or decrease speed
Comparison of increase and decrease
To focus on trend comparison at a certain stage, it is necessary to distinguish the summary side and import data.
eg: declining time and remaining at time, the figure for Japan soared at time, exceeding at last. (Describes Japan’s trend of first falling, then stabilizing, then rising, and finally surpassing.)
Sentence pattern
Sentence patterns to describe trends
1. Data describing the object: increase/fell
2. there be
3. Time: witnessed
4. Trend: be illustrated
5. Description object: experience
Special sentence patterns
Import data method
eg: car sales increased sharply from 30% to 70% in 2000
car sales increased sharply in 2000, which rose to 70%
time management
Review question key points
5mins
beginning
2mins
Overview
4mins
Detail 1
5mins
Detail 2
5mins